Obama’s Prefabricated Henhouse: Notes on The 2013 Inaugural Address, Part I
Lambert Strether blogs at Corrente.
Each of these passages has faults of its own, but, quite apart from avoidable ugliness, two qualities are common to all of them. The first is staleness of imagery; the other is lack of precision. … As soon as certain topics are raised, the concrete melts into the abstract and no one seems able to think of turns of speech that are not hackneyed: prose consists less and less of words chosen for the sake of their meaning, and more and more of phrases tacked together like the sections of a prefabricated henhouse. – George Orwell, Politics and the English Language.
Obama’s second inaugural address (January 21, 2013) was so shoddy and forgettable -– everyone did, in fact, forget it, and promptly, too, despite contemporaneous hagiography – and yet so unpleasant to read, as hack jobs are to all but hacks, that I couldn’t bring myself to finish this piece on it in a timely fashion. However, the advent of the SOTU – John Favreau’s last White House deliverable before he leaves for Hollywood – has concentrated my mind. Now, there’s very little here for the student of rhetoric to emulate; but I hope that by throwing many of the “phrases tacked together” into buckets or categories, I can at least persuade the reader to listen to the SOTU with a well-attuned but skeptical ear. And if the categories are justly chosen, maybe I can use them for the SOTU as well.
So, I’m going to color code the speech as follows:
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